Writing your personal statement for the AMCAS application can be daunting. Although most students focus mainly on GPA and MCAT scores, the personal statement is a very important component of your application and should be carefully written. It is your opportunity to share with admissions committees things about you that are not noted in other sections of your application.
The AMCAS essay is limited to 5300 characters (~1 page). If you are applying for a dual-degree program (e.g., MD/PHD), you will be required to submit additional essays: MD/PhD essay and Significant Research Experience essay.
The Pre-Health Advising Office recommends you have several different people objectively read your personal statement and provide constructive feedback. Your letter-writers are often a great option. There are also resources on campus that can assist you, such as your major advisor, the UGA Writing Center or Elizabeth Hughes (Honors Pre-Health Advisor).
What should be included?
Use the AMCAS essay as an opportunity to distinguish yourself from other applicants. Consider and write your essay carefully.
Some questions you may want to consider while writing this essay are:
- Why have you selected the field of medicine?
- What motivates you to learn more about medicine?
- How have you demonstrated your interest and commitment to your decision?
- What experiences have allowed you to develop the skills necessary to be successful in medical school and to become an effective physician?
- Did you have any exposure to role models who influenced your decision? Which of their attributes inspired you?
- Are your perceptions of the medical profession realistic?
- What are your professional goals?
- Is there anything you wish for medical schools to know about you that hasn't been disclosed in other sections of the application?
In addition, you may wish to include information such as:
- Unique hardships, challenges, or obstacles that may have influenced your educational pursuits.
- Commentary on significant fluctuations in your academic record that are not explained elsewhere in your application.
What should NOT be included?
- Avoid cliches: How many times do you think admissions committees have read the phrase, “I want to become a physician because I like science and I want to help people”?
- Avoid being vague: "[Insert experience] was challenging and rewarding." What does that mean? Be specific about what was impactful and how it affected you.
- Avoid brash decision-making: Your decision to become a doctor should be the result of a series of thoughtful, conscious, and reflective decisions. NOT an instantaneous realization. Similarly, you have not “always known” that you want to be a physician. No one is "born to be a doctor." Nothing is innate, you have to work for it.
- Avoid excuses: In general, there are better uses for your personal statement than explaining away and justifying poor grades, incidents of misconduct, etc. However, if you choose to address these subjects, be sure to focus on what you have learned from those incidents and how your experiences have made you a stronger person. Never, ever blame anyone else for your mistakes.
- Avoid restating resume: Choose ONE or TWO significant and distinguishing experiences to elaborate upon.
- Avoid grandiosity: Claiming that you plan to cure cancer (or HIV, or healthcare disparities, or anything else) shows a grave lack of understanding of whatever problem you are planning to solve. Similarly, avoid “I know what it is like to be a physician from [shadowing/clinical volunteer experience].” No, you do not. That is precisely why you are hoping to go to medical school.
- Avoid inflammatory or controversial topics: You do not know the values, beliefs, and background of the person who is reading your essay. For these reasons, it is advisable to avoid making any strong statements regarding politics, religion, and other polarizing topics. Be extremely cautious to avoid expressing any views that could be construed as derogatory to any group. Additionally, your beliefs are not the only “correct” beliefs.
- Do not lie: Honesty and ethical behavior are the hallmarks of being a physician. Do not include details that you are not prepared to talk about or are simply untrue.